The Proposal [๐˜ˆ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ˆ๐˜ถ๐˜ฅ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฌ ๐˜•๐˜ฐ๐˜ต ๐˜Œ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ ๐˜š๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ ๐˜Œ๐˜ข๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜Š๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜š๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฆ]

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๐—˜๐˜€๐˜๐—ถ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ฑ ๐—ฅ๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฑ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ง๐—ถ๐—บ๐—ฒ๐Ÿ•’: 2 minutes

๐—”๐˜‚๐˜๐—ต๐—ผ๐—ฟ: L. Steeleโœ๐Ÿป ๐—Ÿ๐—ถ๐˜€๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ป๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ง๐—ถ๐—บ๐—ฒ: 10 hr 12 min ๐ŸŽง
๐—ก๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ(๐˜€):ย Shane East, Zara-Hampton Brownย ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ

๐—ง๐—›๐—˜ ๐—ค๐—จ๐—œ๐—–๐—ž ๐—”๐—ก๐—— ๐——๐—œ๐—ฅ๐—ง๐—ฌ

๐—ฆ๐˜๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐˜€: โญ
๐—”๐˜‚๐—ฑ๐—ถ๐—ผ: ๐ŸŽง๐ŸŽง.5
๐—ฆ๐—ฝ๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ: ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ
๐—ฆ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐˜† ๐—™๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐˜: Interconnected Standalone
๐—˜๐—ป๐—ฑ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐˜๐˜†๐—ฝ๐—ฒ: HAE
๐—ก๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ถ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ ๐—ฆ๐˜๐˜†๐—น๐—ฒ: Dual POV, Duet Narration

๐Ÿšจ๐Ÿšจ๐—–๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜๐—ฎ๐—ถ๐—ป๐˜€ ๐—ฆ๐—ฝ๐—ผ๐—ถ๐—น๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐˜€๐Ÿšจ๐Ÿšจ

Listen. ๐—Ÿ๐—œ๐—ฆ๐—ง๐—˜๐—ก.

I try not to write negative reviews. Truly. Not every book is for everyone, and just because something doesnโ€™t work for me doesnโ€™t mean it wonโ€™t work for someone else.

But sometimesโ€ฆ we cannot silence ourselves.

Firstโ€”this was my first L. Steele book. Iโ€™ve had the Morally Grey Billionaires series on my TBR forever, so when I saw the audiobook bundle on Audible, I thought I scored.

I did not score.

Secondโ€”I love Shane East. Obsessed. Would listen to that man read the dictionary and still rate it five stars.

So this was a double letdown. Not only was the story a WTF, but I couldnโ€™t even properly enjoy Mr. Eastโ€™s voice because I kept getting pulled out byโ€ฆ everything happening in this book.

Letโ€™s start with the premise.

Lila is a wedding planner (and yes, she idolizes The Wedding Planner, whichโ€ฆ in hindsight, shouldโ€™ve been my first clue). She tells a client to run from her fiancรฉ, gets blackmailed, and ends up in a marriage-of-convenience situation.

Okay. Fine. Weโ€™ve seen this before. Iโ€™m seated.

Thereโ€™s tension. Attraction. Liam starts catching feelings. He even opens up about his trauma (which, side note, felt very out of left field and tied to backstory from other books that I didnโ€™t have).

And Lila?

Still pushing him away. Constantly.

But the real hook is her secret. We donโ€™t find out what it is for most of the book, and thatโ€™s what kept me going.

Whatโ€™s wrong?
Why does she keep pulling away?

Then we finally get the reveal.

She goes live on social mediaโ€ฆ and removes her wig.

And youโ€™re likeโ€”oh.

๐—ข๐—ต ๐—ฑ๐—ฎ๐—บ๐—ป. This is serious.
And then you learn she has alopecia.

Nowโ€”before anyone comes for meโ€”Iโ€™m not saying that isnโ€™t something that can deeply impact someone. Of course it can. But the way it was built up as this massive, relationship-ending secret that would make Liam disgusted with her?

Thatโ€™s where it lost me.

Because the contrast wasโ€ฆ jarring.

Liam: shares intense personal trauma
Lila: โ€œIโ€™m bald.โ€

And the reaction to it all just didnโ€™t land for me. The fear, the secrecy, the push-pullโ€”it felt disproportionate to what was actually happening on the page.

And THEN.

Liam shaves his head so he can โ€œexperience what sheโ€™s been through.โ€

At that point, I was just trying to make it to the end.

And I did. Out of sheer stubbornness.

I wouldnโ€™t tell someone not to read thisโ€ฆ but this one definitely wasnโ€™t for me.

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